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This is my first creation so it can be bad.
Posted ( 30/04/08 ) 2:07 pm



Posted ( 30/04/08 ) 5:45 pm

Alright, I don't want to break you down, I'm just gonna give you some advice.

Your render isn't really edited, only the sword. Try putting some effect on the guy himself as well.
The sword effect is kinda cool, but make it blend into the background a bit more, the colors aren't really matching.
Your name should be bigger, it's illegible on the avatar. And put some effects on it as well, for example Bevel and Emboss - Pillow Emboss might give you a good result.
The lower side of the render doesn't really make sense, I suggest just moving the render down, so the white part is gone.

Hope this helps you out a little, just ask me if you need anything.

Requiem wrote:

Alright, I don't want to break you down, I'm just gonna give you some advice.

Your render isn't really edited, only the sword. Try putting some effect on the guy himself as well.
The sword effect is kinda cool, but make it blend into the background a bit more, the colors aren't really matching.
Your name should be bigger, it's illegible on the avatar. And put some effects on it as well, for example Bevel and Emboss - Pillow Emboss might give you a good result.
The lower side of the render doesn't really make sense, I suggest just moving the render down, so the white part is gone.

Hope this helps you out a little, just ask me if you need anything.

He put light effects on the render itself.
And the sword is nice, I've seen the image in full size, I'll post it in a sec together with the stock img.

This:


Became this:

I know the stock... it's in the pack I uploaded here in the resources forum -.-"
I'm just trying to help him out, saying what I think would ameliorate this creation.

Requiem wrote:

I know the stock... it's in the pack I uploaded here in the resources forum -.-"
I'm just trying to help him out, saying what I think would ameliorate this creation.

Yes next time i shall think to your advice it is just my first creation i made...
Ty for the advice anyway :D

The lightening stone is not so good...It must be darker...I shall change it later or i will make some others later..